Comment 1932

By sloanrox (registered) | Posted November 08, 2006 at 00:52:59

Dear Mr. Spencer:

My intent is not to be rude, but honest. The position you are seeking is one with a great deal of responsibility. Part of this responsibility is representing our ward at City Hall, in both written and oral communications. This communication is the backbone of what you will be able to do for our ward.

To be frank, your write up is extremely sloppy. It is loaded with grammatical and spelling errors. If you could not take a few minutes to have someone proof it, or at the very least use a spell check program, how can I trust you to pay attention to the smaller details of your every day work as Councillor?

What you posted here is similar to a resume if you were job hunting. You don't get a second chance to make a first impression...and mine of you is not favorable. It has everything to do with allowing yourself to be represented in this manner.

Good luck with your endeavours, but unfortunately for you, you are already one vote down.

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