Comment 41261

By Fred Street (anonymous) | Posted May 28, 2010 at 21:33:55

Here's a thought. What if the article had simply read:

York Blvd. Commuter Double-take Starts Monday
Stretches of York, then Wilson, going two-way

"Hamilton motorists, cyclists and bus-bound commuters will notice some major changes downtown this summer."

Problem solved, and you avoid selling a golden future that has yet to materialize. Think of how the Connaught Group would have been welcomed if you applied the same ebullient copywriting standards:

Core Revival Connaught Be Stopped
Downtown dream team raises all boats, reverses decades of commercial decline

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